We can present May 26th

Per Fredda's post - "Our last regular class meeting is TUESDAY, MAY 19. People who are ready to present their work may do so. EVERYONE needs to have their prototype work printed and set up for critique."

I vote that we present on the final day, TUESDAY, MAY 26.

I NEED the time to prepare my presentation. As it is, I will be working on my panels tomorrow... ekk - this is the worst time to be going to press at my newspaper job.

Also, we need to script the intro, which I personal vote Linda to deliver... Anyone else thoughts?

Linda's panels ... filling up?

Any feedback on this latest version? 

I wanted a really empty feel, but it fills up fast when I add the facts. Is this getting too busy? Also, does it feel cohesive? Also, no handprint - I haven't found a place for it yet. Yikes!

 I can't believe we have only one more week. 

Are these too busy?

I'm having trouble balancing the demands of the assignment (Thought, Dialogue, Action) and desire to educate and inform with the fact that it all begins to look very cluttered when I begin to add in facts, etc. Even my 7 year old said that there was too much going on. (And I'm not even done with panel 1 yet.) However, he WAS l0oking at them all together, and when viewed in isolation they are maybe okay.

Also, FYI, I lost a lot of work both Friday and today from overloading the machines. I am trying to work big to start, but BEWARE, it's dangerous. I have to go in and give paragraph styles to my type.

Help?

Meg

Linda's newest triptych

Here's an empty palette and my progress so far. Any comments?

Linda

Here are my two current logos. Thoughts?

Meg

Linda's work in progress

Here's what I have so far.

Linda