Monday, May 11, 2009

Linda's panels ... filling up?

Any feedback on this latest version? 

I wanted a really empty feel, but it fills up fast when I add the facts. Is this getting too busy? Also, does it feel cohesive? Also, no handprint - I haven't found a place for it yet. Yikes!

 I can't believe we have only one more week. 

1 comment:

  1. Linda, this has really come together for me. I feel a cohesiveness throughout the images and the pulled info seems just enough.
    I think the middle panel is a bit busy - the other 2 look great to me.
    I'd try moving the drips with info to the right more - then moving the 'what if' to the top and the 'When kids learn' either under the what if or at the bottom.
    Hope that makes sense.
    What about a traced out version of the logo in the top right corner if the middle panel on the palette?

    I am having issues at work today and may not make it to class on time... hope to see you sooner than later

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